Since we handed in our drafts for the video, digipak and magazine advert we have been given quite a bit of feedback. Now we have started to make improvements on them. So far we have focused on the digipak, we have changed the fonts on the digipak and we have also changed the pictures and the layout slightly to give it a more professional feel. We have used ideas from both of us such as the font was Rosie's idea and I made the choice that we should get more pictures instead of stretching one across two pages.The magazine advert doesn't need as much work doing to it, we are just going to adjust the placing and the size of the fonts and thats all that needs doing but we may make further changes when we come to do it.
Finally I have written up a plan as we are going to do some more filming on Wednesday 9th November as we did not have enough film for the draft, we will record on Wednesday and then edit on Thursday and Friday. Here is a copy of what we need to film. Although we have this plan it is likely we will film shots as well as the ones written down.